Thursday, May 10, 2012

Galileo Poem

Great at astronomy
Aspired to prove Copernicus' theory true
Loved studying the solar system
Incredibly smart
Liked studying medicine, but he wanted to study astronomy more
Entirely true to Copernicus' theory
Oh, and he was almost killed by the Church for trying to prove Copernicus' theory was true

4 comments:

  1. Old style,
    unoriginal but pleasing,
    nice to see once in a while,
    a poem with a nice releasing.

    Your poem has a refreshing structure, and it was on topic and had no flaws seen by skimming.

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  2. Your poem wasn't uninformative, nor was it boring.

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  3. Since you gave so much information after the word Galileo, you made the blog look better. Good job :)

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  4. Although the poem begins well, you do a poor job with "O"!

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